1ST PERSON PRONOUNS: I, my, me, mine, we, us, our, ours, myself, ourselves
3RD PERSON PRONOUNS: He, she, they, it, character’s name, him, her, them, themselves, hers, his, theirs, someone, one’s self, its, either, one, anybody/one, everybody/one, each
Stepping steadily, I placed one foot after another on the hard pavement. The air was brisk, drawing a chill into my lungs each time I took a breath, but I chose to focus on the rhythm of my walk. Left, then right, occasionally kicking the odd loose pebble as I made my way down the seemingly never-ending strip of concrete. I wrinkled my nose at the oily smells of the city around me, taking in the sights of the tall buildings that engulfed the skyline as far as my eyes could see. The sky was beginning to darken, so I quickened my pace, hurrying to make it home before night fell. I didn’t need to be outside after dark.
The timid girl steadily continued down the dim streets, her eyes pointed directly down at the pavement. She shivered, as she drew a deep breath from the cool air around her, tuning out the lights and sounds of the hustling city. Her face scrunched up, and it would be anyone’s guess as to what had crossed her mind. She took a wide glance at the tall skyscrapers, faltering as she saw night was falling fast. The mousy girl quickened her step, hurrying off to her mystery destination.
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